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Prototype 18th Feb 2016, 11:52 AM edit delete

This can best be described as a silly page, but it also introduces Annabelle who is a partner at the detective office.


Well, this is an odd but intriguing beginning. I am genuinely curious as to where this is going.

Masturbation is always important research.

If she's not locking the door, that means secretly she wanted her to barge in.

Nice punchline.

logan force
thanks! that's one of the few lines I added, I think...

Haha...good dialogue. Love the 70's hair/clothes and look to everything!