Dark Passion - Page 02

Prototype 18th Feb 2016, 11:52 AM edit delete

This can best be described as a silly page, but it also introduces Annabelle who is a partner at the detective office.

Wargyrl edit delete reply

Well, this is an odd but intriguing beginning. I am genuinely curious as to where this is going.

bravo1102 edit delete reply

Masturbation is always important research.

El Cid edit delete reply

If she's not locking the door, that means secretly she wanted her to barge in.

SophieD edit delete reply

Nice punchline.

logan force edit delete reply

thanks! that's one of the few lines I added, I think...

Banes edit delete reply

Haha...good dialogue. Love the 70's hair/clothes and look to everything!

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